Awesome job...sorry if its true....but its really good writing like you got me sucked into the story..

Thats a very sad poem! feel better! can u plz comment and vote on sum of my poems! thanx!

This isn't a real story, and I feel fine. Thanks for the comments people.

awesome poem.. loved it.. keep up the good work.. keep in touch

Beautifully written! It's such a sad poem! You did an amazing job. Keep posting! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

great job sad poem but it was great

aw, that's a good one

hey, its good. thanks for the comment

Thanks for the comments people, still learning...

Wow, i liked this one. Not only because it was a good read, but because the way you explained youself, and the way you explained how much you loved her. And how you addmited to lying, and doing thoes things you did. I can really feel in this poem that you love her. And honstly, i can really feel that you were sorry.

Loved it.
-Courtney

wow!! very good! sad and just really well-written! i loved it! 5/5

Whoa. Is this true? It's very intense. Rock on, dude

wow greaty job.. sorry that you made a mistake like that... hope everythign works out 5/5

nice one.i hope i can do the long poem as u do

Wow. I like it. Sad but very good. Keep up the writing.

Very intense,....Great work there.
I like the way u ask questions n answer them urself in a subtle but honest manner.
Its wonderfull n touches the soul--atleast mine.
god bless :-)