Woweeee, great as always =) I love it...you're so amazing hunnie, so so so so so amazing <3 I love you. You're an incredible writer, and you better not ever stop!! <33 I love you. This write was really beautiful, so perfect, like you. I love you hun..great work. xxxxx <33

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

powerful words and great vision of war almost perfect. It could use abit more gore to push the envelope bu t you did fine... If you get time please read any of my featured poems and comment and vote take care and will do the same to you ...

Good reflections, nice begining, very true. you create a tension which you manage to keep to the very last word, and a little more...;)