Well done, my dear. Sometimes this is what a lot of people need, just a extra push. There's nothing wrong with that. Most of the time it works. hugs, love, *Ann*

Loved the poem, loved the message, loved it all! Brilliant as always, and although I was unable to comment on Six Stars in the Night, it was another masterpiece! I really liked the last stanza....beautifully penned! Take care, love ya~Holly

excellent. it was great. i really liked it. sorry i havent been on in a while. awsome job. i think it totally rocks. hope your ok? Much love

Nick

Very powerful write Heather. You're sending out a beautiful message with this one. It never hurts to give someone that extra push they need. Awesome job.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

great poem, but this is so weird, my mom made me sign up to this thing were it emails me a word a day (but i never read them) and imprisonment was the word for today. strange. great poem!

~PLP~ lil slam~ lots of hugs & love~

great poem...well said heather hun....i agree with ann, what else i can say..well done! big hugs to ya....all my love,

love freedom,
clouds.~

True independance can be a gift, but it can also be a curse. There are times when you must complete things on your own, and there are times when help is needed. You alone can decide which is which. Read some of my work if you find the time.

I must confess you left me gaping and seeking for more breathe, lol
This is beautiful. Thanks for the comment Heather. Take care and be safe.
onelove xoxoxo

this is most definitely a masterpiece with a very good meaning yet which this poem is filled with. you have written this deeply and wonderfully. i really like it. amazing work!

5/5

love always...*hugs*

Another excellent poem. You are a brilliant writer.

Nice write Heather...Sorry I haven't been by your side of the site in a while. I been stuck on the discussion boards...lol I like this...It's great to have a friend like that. I can understand you push because you know what they are capable of and you know what they could have...That's what you call a GOOD friend. Nice job...5/5 :)

heather, this is brilliant.....and i never really thought about it like that....but now that i read this poem, you have a very good point =P....i love it *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Great poem. I haven't been on in a while, but life's stresses have urged me to write more.

Keep writing.

-S~

Enjoyed reading this I think you are right people do need a push sometimes.

take care