by HOLLY ARMER May 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Your heart breaks |
And yet another great one |
by Gemma Sinead Hayward
You can feel the anger, can't you? I love the lines 'inflicting bitter revenge' and 'i am the creator' . Imagery's a beaut! |
Great similie in stanza 2! Keep it up, Holly! I LOVE YOU dollz, 5/5 |
by Timothy r
I cant give you enough praise for your writing my dear, this poem captures what everyone feels at one time or another, fantastic as always..Love, Tim |