Comments : Your Heart's Bitter Revenge

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I cant give you enough praise for your writing my dear, this poem captures what everyone feels at one time or another, fantastic as always..Love, Tim

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Great similie in stanza 2! Keep it up, Holly! I LOVE YOU dollz, 5/5

    Love,
    Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Gemma Sinead Hayward

    You can feel the anger, can't you? I love the lines 'inflicting bitter revenge' and 'i am the creator' . Imagery's a beaut!

  • 19 years ago

    by Dead As Yesterday

    And yet another great one

    Dave....