Whoa...intense hun <3 I love it. You did an awesome job with this one...very deep and powerful, I'm so in love with your writing...you're so amazing hunnie <33 I love you sooo much <3 xxxxxx Don't ever die, please, I love you xxxxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Well done. I bow to the master. This was intense and had great word usage and good imagery. My mistake great imagery. Keep writing.

it was really beautiful, the flow was perfect each word blended into the next and i really liked the message in the poem, i wonder, what inspired this??
5/5
always<3
cate

p.s thank you sooo much for the comments you dont know how much they really mean to me. :)

p.p.s i also loved the description in this poem!!