Aww thats really good for your first poem!. :o)... Its sad that the one you love took a like diffrent road in life....

5/5**

xoxo,
**Heather**

It's beautiful!

I love it, when i heard i love you for the first time it was just like that.

THIS WAS GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!

v.gud thanx 4 commentin on ma poem!

great poem!! i can really relate to it.

5/5.....

God Bless!!

itd be greatly appreciated if u voted and commented on my poems and quotes!! thanks!!!! =)

You are good.. You have talent.. I'm gonna put you on my favorites and wait for you to post more : P! lol please don't make me wait too long.. Once again 5/5.. A lot of emotion I LOVE IT! Hee hee i'm gonna shut up now before i make you think i'm a retard but for real.. Keep up the good work! *hugs*

~Jessica

Good poem! I loved it. Very sad though