Wow, brilliant, absolutely brilliant. There are little words to describe this poem.
Your words were flawless. The stanza setting was perfect... definetely uniquely made with brilliant rhymes.
The story was adorable, especially the green eyes... I can see green eyes.
A unique and absolutely stunning display of work!
If I could add a poem to my favourites, I would definetely add this one!
5/5

intresting i really like this.... i've started to wonder if there is a god or not myself right now... and im still not sure... that poem was really cute and well written i really like it awesome job