by Eden May 8, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Sorry... |
Ok no offense but this is confusing to me. i stopped on the first paragraph because i couldnt understand what you were saying. |
by Charlotte
Wow... Really, all I can say is wow. You have a style in your writing that captures me. Maybe its the dark faucet that you have, or perhaps it is something we as uneducated humans cannot quite grasp... Well written.. |
I find this poem soothing, for I am going through this right now... |
by Jay27
wow, lot of anger there...i feel fake because i have to admit a lot of my poems are just inventions, and in others...when i am protesting in my poetry about various villains and bad people...usually the villain is me and i am writing about myself. anyway, it sounds like someone let you down bigtime...good poem, but i bet you'd sooner have a good friend... |