wow, lot of anger there...i feel fake because i have to admit a lot of my poems are just inventions, and in others...when i am protesting in my poetry about various villains and bad people...usually the villain is me and i am writing about myself. anyway, it sounds like someone let you down bigtime...good poem, but i bet you'd sooner have a good friend...

I find this poem soothing, for I am going through this right now...

Wow... Really, all I can say is wow. You have a style in your writing that captures me. Maybe its the dark faucet that you have, or perhaps it is something we as uneducated humans cannot quite grasp... Well written..

Ok no offense but this is confusing to me. i stopped on the first paragraph because i couldnt understand what you were saying.