by Robert
I really like your work and your Pride for your county is admirable. I have never been in the service myself. Born with a heart defect and all. I guess the fight to mne is helping my family and friends out. I have doubt about who runs the nation from time to time. But I look highly to a man that fights for what he beleives in. I guess my biggest question could you follow orders you know in your heart would be wrong. its a hard question Read Evil For Evil it a tidbit I did a while back and the protector of the Two Towers and tell me what you think. Great job on the poem your pride and faith are markers for us all but my question are those markers put to people that value you as much as the idea you hold dear. Take care... |
by Taylor
That was unbelievable. My brother is a marine...a 18 yearold marine. I'm going to e-mail it to him soon and I know he'll love it even more then i did. |
I've Never Read a Poem Like This Before, And I'm Glad I Got The Chance To Because This Was Good!! You Worded It So Beautifuly And So Educated You Put All Other Poets 2 Shame With This Poem Excellent 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by Krista
thanx for all that you do for our country. without ppl like you this country wouldn't be what it is. i have family in the marines and my boy friend is a futre marine not counting all of the marines in his family. i think that if this country had more patriotic ppl like you we would be better off. alot of ppl don't understand what ppl like you fight for and don't understand why we do fight but i understand and i just want to take time to thank you. it means alot to no that ppl do care. your poems are really great. keep up the good work. and good luck to where the marines will take you and good luck on your writing. |
Just like everyone else is saying, thanks for helping the country. good poem too i love this one also |
by *NiCoLe*
this poem is amazing...the pride for your country is very wonderful. I plan on being in the military so one day i may be saying this...but for now i really enjoyed this poem. It deserves more than a 5...but keep writing. |
by Rain
Stirrings of hope shine through a window partly covered in shadows, its nice to know someone cares for our country this much. |
by The Queen
It chills me to the bones...You stand head and shoulders above others, i admire you and everything you took and will take to care for your country....goodluck to wherever marines will take u... |
Your poem was really good. You did a great job. Thanks for all you do for this country. I plan on joining the military next year. 5/5 wounderful work. |