Loved it. how is it you are able to create a story within your piece? I could imagine these would be excellent to listen to if you could read them pubically.

I like the sidenotes of scenery that you detail so well and are able to tie into the piece with the same style without detaching from the poem itself. My favorite stance was,
"Enoch journeyed through he stars, carrying his hope securely.
Though, even flight’s familiar momentum censored his usual graces.
He glittered whence he landed, standing on the balcony of his tutor’s residence. She invited him in, still shivering from the flight. But then, so did he… "
gorgous imagery along with a mystical and magical (if you will) effect.

I also enjoyed the last lines,
"He settled in the guest bedroom for the coming dawn, accepting the inevitable as his only familiar…
And Enoch let the dreams flood him."
Perfect way to conclude the piece in a poetically skilled structure.

Excellent

I've been working on my narrating skills, for I would love to tell them out loud.

You chose my favorite lines as well, nice seeing you again =) And thank you.