Comments : The lie of our lives

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow so full of so many differnet emotions! It's hard to live a lie! Stay Strong! Very well written! 5/5 Take Care of your self Rachel! Brooke~

  • 19 years ago

    by Becky drake

    It is so hard to live a lie, so just don't do it. You have to learn to br true to you first. I loved the way this poem was written, you moved me with all your words. Great write. Love Becky