very good and I can relate and ty for ur comments on my poems that means alot to me that people like them once again thank you

i love the flow of this poem. you are a good poet. You were talking about in one of your comments you made in one of my poems that sometimes the only thing you can turn to is the blade. well writting helps you stay away from the blade. Think about that. Whenever you start to think about cutting get out a peice of paper. That is what i do and it helps a lot. i love all the commets and votes i get from people and that is what keeps me strong. Stay stong and take care.
`~Brused Angel~
aka nichole renee`

this poem is totally cool. it's like the first poem i wrote, about me throwing him to the floor. but slitting his throat will work!

thank u all for the comments...they mean a lot and i will definitley get back to you and comment on ur poems.
take care,
Renee

awwww loved it..thx for the comment i really appreciate it!!

Unloved ♥

Very deep...and very good.

i like it <3

wow that was so emotional and heartfelt i loved all of it! very poetic. the rhyme and structure was great!
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*bec* xXx

Honest and very intersting. Keep writing.

xxx

i think that it was really good. i liked it. it reminds me of my first love but then he stopped talkin to me and that was it