by Nici
I think that the right words are in this poem, the thought is certainly behind them at least. Again do not feel that you have to rhyme, this worked ok without rhyming. |
by Jimmy Jr.
That was an excellent poem great job |
Certainly made me shudder... |
by Brook
You're poems are really good and original. 5/5 |
by Sarah Dowlly
I liked this alot, very dark & provoked great imagery, welldone 5/5 |