Im soooo sorry about your brother and i hope he will be ok! Great poem by the way! I liked it a lot! |
by **Just Her**
im soo sorry about your brother as well. I think the message was very sweet and amazing.. but i think you could loose the repition in 4th line because it really doesnt fit in with your stanzas... |
by Anna
this poem is rlly sweet, i hope ur brother gets better as it sounds as though your rlly close. check out my poems :). love ya *Anna* xxxxx |
I'm truely sorry but your poem wqas beautiful... I hope your brother gets better coz I know i'd die without my brother's!! |
by ~*Ley*~
that was very well written i like the style. keep up the good work. |
by NoPatience
omg this poem was so touching and sad. im sorry about ur brother. 5/5 feelbetter |
by W H O R E
Aww... *hug* Im so sorry about your brother.. 5/5 |
wow, just reading you comment at the top made me sad the poem holds feeling and im sorry about your brother. |
by steve
beautiful poem to your brother...... |
You are a great writer..5/5 for sure..keep up the great work.. |
this was a good poem it expressed what they felt which is hard for some poeople to do |
by Nikki
ohhh this is such a gorgeous poem, you really have done a great job! it's very emotional |
by Deathcanwait
awwwwww :( its really sad but still beautiful. i really like it. |
Awww that's so sad!! I'm sorry to hear about your brother. I hope he is ok.. |
great poem very touching I loved it, Im truly sorry about your brother and hope that he will recover soon. |
by Robert
nice poem :( and sad too. well done |
by Carmen
Aw...that reli shows how much u love yur brother |
by shannon
soooo goood!! 5.5 i enjoyed that! |
by Gracie Jo
Great poem. Thanks for the comment and vote. And yes, that is me in the picture. <3 |
This is a very great for somebody of your age. It has a nice tempo to it |