Nice dedication. Sweet of you. X

Good job i like your poems a lot, 5/5!!

*tear* that's beautiful...hope he's okay now.

xxx

This was so beautiful! I love how you dedicated to someone you really love, your brother. It shows how close you two are. I loved this poem so much. xX Stay Strong Xx

aw thats so sad, i hope he gets better soon, i love this poem, very good indeed!

very sad poem. i am very sorry about your borther. i hope he pulls through. nice poem too.

wow deep 5/5

wow thats a really sad poem and i truly hope your brother gets better really soon!

was verry good tho and keep up writing.

Jacs
xxx

Rukki,
i never knew you had a brother but i'll tell u this, your peom is just great. It really makes me appriciate my family and friends.
* stefani *

I wish i had that many comment and votes on my poetry

Nice job though..i love your detail and flow
great all around job
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

Aww how sad i know how you feel my cousin has that