Her fortress

by katie!   May 8, 2005


Lighting bolts, smash against the walls of my castle
A fortress of black magic, and imagination
The walls shudder under the sheer force of evil
Claw at the ebony walls in pure desperation

Clouds of azure smoke, rise from the pain
Shrouded in steam is her shadowed tower
Sitting and laughing, maniacal cackles crack the night
Emanating from her comes utter power

Shouting orders into the ruby blood of delight
Searing herself with evil, drinking the blood
Sacrificial animals roam through the corridors
Unlock her mind, so the terror can flood

Rain shatters down on the lone lighted window
Crashing on the roof, echoing through the halls
Bolt upright she wakes, possessed by hatred
Answering to the agonizing thunders calls

Walk along a passage, leading into the empty room
Swirling powers explode in a bolt of pain from her eyes
As the room expands, unable to take the strain
Stone smashes through the air from the tears she cries...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow that was amazing! You did an exellent job! Loved it! Take Care! Brooke~ 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    great poem! deserves well over a 3.7! i'm givin it a 5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost Girl

    Very dark....i agree with Amy, very well done! Stay strong
    xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    WOW...WOW...WOW!!! this was brilliant! im pretty much speechless.. it was so dark, but powerful too