by Richard May 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
You never told me before |
by Kaylee
I agree that it seemed rushed. You have some beautiful word choices but you just need to slow it down even it makes the poem longer. The words should be addicting enough to keep their attention. |
by shannon
Aww thats so cute.. i love it |
by Queen Marlene
aww... :*(... aww.... thats so cute.. don't stop writing you wil go far.. |
by Robert
this was ok but what were you really waiting foir her death you kinda went from school to growing old in a matter of a few lines and you seemed to skip alot of things. It just did not work for me sorry... |
by Robert
this was ok but what were you really waiting foir her death you kinda went from school to growing old in a matter of a few lines and you seemed to skip alot of things. It just did not work for me sorry... |