by JeBeGood May 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
He smiled |
by ~*Ley*~
really good...im actually going to properly comment on it another day when its not 6 50 am and i havnt been up the whole time. jus remind me and i will. as far as i can wrap my mind around it right now its a 5/5 because it just is. its got good rhyme and nice flow. |
by Robert
Put a smile to my face very well done and tasteful. I got one you should read called Pure Passion tell me what you think when you get the time... |
WOW! This is so full of passion and lust! I loved it a lot and it flowed so well! I loved the ending too..... |