WOW! This is so full of passion and lust! I loved it a lot and it flowed so well! I loved the ending too.....
Love alwayz.....
Haily
XOXOXOXOXO

Put a smile to my face very well done and tasteful. I got one you should read called Pure Passion tell me what you think when you get the time...

really good...im actually going to properly comment on it another day when its not 6 50 am and i havnt been up the whole time. jus remind me and i will. as far as i can wrap my mind around it right now its a 5/5 because it just is. its got good rhyme and nice flow.
~Freak~