another breathtaking poem...you're going into my favs....you're such a good writer!

Very well written! You have a lot of talent I like your word choice. The poem once again flowed beautifully! ~Brooke~

this reminds me a lot of a song... cant remember what it was called though *double blinks* oh well! great poem 5/5

Hang in there, you'll make it. nice poem.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

another great poem! You writing is sorta like mine....like the content but its all your own....great!