But if God truly sent this "borrowed angel" then he would know exactly when to take him back. Read some of my work if you find the time.

Aww this is gorgeous well done baby keep writing god bless xxx

I think you grandpa me out and I think you did it for alot of people who read your work. Well for those poems that you write of people close to your life I think you should hold them for safe keeping so that you can show yours when you get older. This type of writing I feel is very private and I would only show it to the ones I am closest too. They will hold more value to your work far more then a perfect stranger just a thought take care...

Aww wow that was practically perfect and amazing, Thank you for your comment on my poem. I really appreciate it. xxx

Amen. *tear* *tear* *tear* I'm sorry. This poem...... makes me sad. I don't know why. About halfway through it I started to tear up. Whats wrong with. I'm sorry but I can't really think straight right now. Good poem. Thank you. kilman = david b. 5/5.

heart felt and very detailed. its really good and i loved it. 5/5

very sad and heartfelt.. i loved it.. keep it up
take care, nouna

Wow...beautifully written...you had me hooked from beginning to end. By the title I knew it wasn't going to be a happy poem but you set it up to where it was still surprising in the end....Excellent write!! :) Take Care.

Wow this is so well written!!

loved the idea brought a tear to my eye *tear* and no ints not the onions beside me..

the flow was great well done!

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Wow... i liked this one to... your a great writer and i wish you lots of luck in the future....

sammie