You

by _simply irresistible_   May 9, 2005


One glance-thats all it took
a simple Innocent look
you were burning, hot on fire
I begged myself "don't make me a liar
all previous pains were swept away
like fallen leaves on an autumn day
you blue eyes pierced my soul from within
my head and heart fought, but i knew what would win
I was hooked like a fish on a pole
I was a runner and you were a hole
I fell into you and met part of me
a piece of myself i had yet to meet
your smile was gorgeous and cool
a look from you made me melt in a pool
a puddle of nerves of dreams and hopes
these thoughts spread out like a thin piece of rope
plans for one turned into two
a future for us, both me and you
a lifetime ahead together or apart
it was something i knew from the start
whatever happens, I will continue to grin
because when my head and heart battled, I knew love would win

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  • 19 years ago

    by LOST iN LOVE

    this poem is sooo good!awesome job!thanks for the comment on mine!keep up the good work!*hugs*
    x0x0
    <3Chelsea

  • 19 years ago

    by Krispie

    i loved it!!!! awesome!!! good job!!!! again i can relate to this hehe...but most of them i can. keep up the good work....i love ur writin!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by JLT

    OMG that is soooooo good... I love that poem... POST MORE!!! YAY! REALLY good 5/5 and i'd give it soooo much more if i could i'd break the freakin scale! *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets

    ~Jessica

  • 19 years ago

    by Court

    aww that poem was soo cute and soo good!!!! great job!!!

    God Bless!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel

    It is a beautiful poem. I love it!

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