This pain

by envy   May 9, 2005


How can this pain be so real
nothing can take it away
you said you loved me
just for play

you lied to me
you told me truths
all to just rip them away
how can this pain be so real

to hurt this bad
is something new
god just help me
tell me its not true

i want you back
but you gone to far
you lied to me
and iv hit the bar

it hurts more to lie such a thing
than to tell me you hated me
at least then it would not hurt
instead of breaking my fragile heart

plz leave feed back or at least rate it i need to know if its good or not

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  • 19 years ago

    by I Love You Shane ♥ Maggie

    very good

  • 19 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Thank you for commiting on mine, and i love this poem-it's well thought out, and the meaning is real(well at least for). Yea, I like poems that i can realate to. but all your poems are great. ttul

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    great poem iv read a few of urs there real good better than mine lol

  • 19 years ago

    by envy

    thanks everyone for leaving feedback

  • 19 years ago

    by Dianna M Tuohy

    Great job, "Joe" :P Heehee!

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