wow, great poem..! I voted a 5.. Please check out my poem "My dream boy dosen't exist" please comment/vote.. thanks a lot... hugs

this poem was good. great job 5/5

great job very well written
5/5

Hey i really enjoyed reading this poem! Keep it up! can you please look for my poem betrayal by minx + pinx. I made a new account so my family and friends wouldn't stumble across the poem cos it's my biggest ever secret and only Jade knows. This is still my main account though. :)

Hey search for my new poem called An Ex - I hate you! It's on the other account so family and friends don't come across it. :)

Lovely touching poem.
My favourite lines are:

My world's become a mental asylum
My home placed beneath your feet