Aww hun, so sad!! Please stay here, I know it's hard, but don't go....Your poems always reminds me so much of my own feelings, I relate so much to them....You really descriped the feeling of depression so amazingly in this one. I really hope that you are ok??? I'm here for you....

*Much love Sabrina*

i WOULD care! always! great poem, wonderfully writen and it's really sad. i'm always here for you! always!

~PLP~ lots of hugs & love~

this poem brought tears to my eyes, its very sad and very much to what im feeling nowadays. sorry to hear you are feeling the same way. i think the only thing a little off on your poem is the ending when you repeated "not a soul" it just interrupts the flow a bit. to better emphasize that point you could change the title to "Not A Soul" instead. but its up to you. i think it was very very well written otherwise. keep it up. and if you ever wanna talk just pm me.
~Freak~

wow, that poem was so powerful. I loved it, thought it went really nice together. Take care. >3jess

=( That is SO sad! I've had a similar sutuation like that!

Wow that was really good, so good, you have so much talent! and its cool to know your from NZ im from welly!!
5/5
xox Bam

Wow.... first of all thanks for commenting on my poem. This was a really amazing poem. I could really relate. Every feeling was described with the perfect words, and the flow was awesome. I can tell you're gonna be on my favorites list. Hope you're okay,
XoxoX
Robin

I'd care. I'm always here, guh! ;) There's always luv sumwhere, please don't leave. PWEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ!!! I can't even count how many of my poems u've commented on, so I'm gonna comment on a few mo, OK? Keep it up, Shawdy, I am so proud of u. MUCH LUV TAKE CARE OF YOSELF PEACE PEACE PEACE, //aRI\\ akA ~+~ShadowShawdy~+~