Good poem... Well done.. :) I've been missing your poems, I hope evrything can get better for you and that you can find happiness

Oh hun, this is so sad. its not rubbish. so beautifully expressed. what a beautiful poem! :)

I hope everything is okay for you girl <3 This was very touching; nicely written: Remember to be strong.

Luffvoo forever,
||Kalah.

Hey got another new poem. Don't like it though :)

yes i do vote on ur poems. Always a 5! :)

Followed through very well. I gave it a 5! Well written! Read some of mine if you find time.

aww im so sorry i hope things start looking up for oyu... great job 5/5

This was also very good. Keep it up!!

this poem is, in itself "beautiful"

good job! :)

I like how you wrote this one. Great job. >3jess

Very well written. Another 5/5. Hold strong huni.

-xx-

u may nt think this is 1 of ur best bt i reli liked it, it was reli beautiful and sad xxx

The abab rhyme scheme did not work well here, the poem felt coppy and forced, work on the flow of the poem and it will improve. I also feel that this poem was cliche, but to each his own. Keep writing.

great.... 5 stars for this one... keep it up..!!

Yeh I see what you mean! Ignore it - the poem is fine, written about your feelings and thats ok. Keep smiling hun! :)

You said this is not one of your best, but I think you have a wonderful way of conveying your sadness in words. A lot of these hit home for me. You have earned a spot in my favorites list.

great job, i hope to read more of ur work soon!!

I just wanted to let you know I added you to my favorites

Beautifully written! Not your best? well I happen to really like it. I think you dad an amazing job! Keep it up! Take Care! Brooke~

very nice man i like it