I like how the rhytm is uneven, and how you use beautiful all the time..

Very good poem...Very...poetic...in a way..

I dunno what to say...I can`t point out what it is i like about it...

It is very good..as simple as that! No need for improvement on this one

This poem is soo amazing, i loved it. You write beautifully. If you could i have some new poems on here and i would really like somebody to comment on them if you would thanks..TTYL

Madison

I LOVE the repetition of beautiful, however I do feel the poem in itself will be even more beautiful if you changed the style of it-
the rhyme scheme could be something like AABC, or ABCBD... adding an extra line to a stanza. This poem could REALLY and truly blossom, all you have to do is change it from bordering ordinary- to extraordinary.
A nice write, nontheless.

Beautifuly Worded I Loved The Part Where You Said "Beautiful Pain" It Was An Awesome Job An Well Worth The 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

OOO hunnie i loved this one! Your such an amazing writer! Keep up the great work!
Love always,
Haily
xoxoxoxoox

It was a very beautiful poem despite the sadness it holds in it. I love your poems so much, there more than just words, they have meaning behind them, keep it up hun

This is so nice...i like it...

And Sabrina...thanks...but you didn't tell me what's your email address...tell me okey...only then i can email to you...Luv ya...jane