by Amanda Bee May 9, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Just look at the way he looks at her |
I love this poem |
by DooDee
OH MY GODD ! GIRL U TOTALLY ROCK !!!!!!!!!!!! this poem was sooo amazing and i really loved it :D:D u have great talent ! WAYY TO GO :D |
by HOLLY ARMER
Beautifully penned, I love this piece! The flow is flawless and your rhymes are natural! These lines are absolutely breathtaking: |
by Amber
It's sweet and every other girl dreams of the same thing! |
by Forever29
Beautifully written from beginning to end! |