short but very good... 5/5!!

For a very short poem there should be no reason for thrith to not be truth. Other then that a good begining but needed more I feel...

personlly i think that your poem is very meaningfull 4 a short poem(o and good) but man you could make it really good (like your other ones) if you read over it and made it a teeny tiny bit longer......other than that great poem
lisa x)