Shattered Mistake

by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE   May 9, 2005


Shattered heart and shattered cries
Leave me here in full disguise
Deepened agony and deepened sorrow
With no real hopes in sight tomorrow
Bloody hands and bloody blade
All your pain you want to fade
Silent cries and silent screams
Corrupting all your happy dreams
Guilty thoughts and guilty noose
You must put all bad things to use
Painful words and painful tears
All have been seen through this broken mirror
Crimson scars and crimson hate
All wrapped together in her shattered mistake.

~Madison Leigh~ May 6th 2005

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  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I think this one is by far my favorite one, the best part in my opinion is
    Deepened agony and deepened sorrow
    With no real hopes in sight tomorrow
    good write 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice job! i really like your examples in this one! your rhyming really helped the poem flow, keep it up! 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    You really put a lot of emotion into this..Great poem! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow i really liked this poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyla

    wow that was good and its the type of poem i really like! I love sad poems and that was exellent!

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