i love it great poem!
ur rhymings awsome xox sam

woah...that was amazing! you come up with some pretty good stuff here! I loved it

Amazing Job!!!! Your a great writer. keep up the good work. Thanks for complimenting my poem. :) xox

~Jessica~

An exellent write! Flowed very well! I loved it! Take Care! Brooke~

Wow this is amazing, I can really relate to it. Excellent...It's funny that we people in here always write a poem with the same title as our profile name =0) Read my poem BleedingAngel if you get the time=0)
Great job...

*Hugs Sabrina*

his poem kept me thinking for a few moments... and a poems never made me do that before! (thats good!) great job.

p.s- the poem that I wrote, 'The Child That Never Seen The Light', was not true. i wrote it in the pov of a women that may have gone threw that. thansk for your comments!

Very good flow, You have so much potential. 5/5

awesome job! i can definately see why its 5/5 out of 11 votes! great job!!

Conceptually brilliant and very well written.

AMAZING! I love it. I agree with Jason--Brilliant and well written.

wow that was good and its the type of poem i really like! I love sad poems and that was exellent!

wow i really liked this poem..

You really put a lot of emotion into this..Great poem! 5/5!

nice job! i really like your examples in this one! your rhyming really helped the poem flow, keep it up! 5/5

I think this one is by far my favorite one, the best part in my opinion is
Deepened agony and deepened sorrow
With no real hopes in sight tomorrow
good write 5/5