youve got a great way of describing scenes, fab poem, very sad thought though, makes you think. keep it up!

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Yeah it did actually happen, just over a year ago I think. Thanx to evry1 who comments!

Hey great poem. I love how you made a character like that. Great job. Keep it up. Thanks for the comment on my poem.~Red

wow this is diffinately one one ur best, keep it up emma luv sam xox

that is a really good poem...i liked it a lot...

Em that is a WICKED poem hun! I aint been on in a while so im just goin' thru ur poems and readin' the comments you've put on mine. I'd totally forgotten about that explosion 'til now. Just makes u realise how easy u forget things if ur not affected. luv yaz Rach x

amazing, very very good, excellent, great flow to it xx