great job

It is good.

Haha. Wow. Can i say im a star wars nerd? Because i loved this poem. I like how you used star wars to describe your love. hehe, and thanks for putting the 'Ewoks' in their.... i love thoes little things. Great job. 5/5

May the force be with you.lol O_o
-Courtney

....Oh.. im not trying to 'bug' ya or n e thing. But in the first stanza... the third line... i think you meant By instead of my. If not.. thats kewl. Just pointing out the obvious. =P

hey i love starwars.. frost off. second i love your poem it is relaly sweet and carries a lot of meaning. you have a lot of potential and talent. trust me. 5/5 nothgin less.

awww that was cute...i liked it keep up the good work MuChLoVe~unseentears