It Was Beautifuly Written And Well Worded 5.0! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Excellent poem. Very sad and sad ending. Great write...flowed wonderfully. Keep it up.
Take Care,
-HaNNah

I think that you have talent, but you need to broaden your horizons, this poem was cliche to me and the rhymes were not very creative. But I believe that if you could write about something other than the cliche things, you would be a very good poet. This poem did not stick out to me from the thousands of others that I've read that are just like it. Keep writing!

Awesome poem. Very good.

This is good, I just don't really care for poems that it seems like people are trying to get attention b/c they cut.

Wow that was absolutely amazing....So touching....wow...i'm speechless...

Ok... this for one was a great poem, also for your two newest poems, I cannot comment on love or friendship poems they were both brilliant, well structured and incredibly enjoyable, I applaud you for both of them, well done and keep writing

WOW!!!! Thats all I can say. This is amazing. Hold strong hon, I am always here if you need someone... No matter what! Feel free to email me anytime, honesty_pays14@hotmail.com

Much Love
xoxo
Broken

IM me rather, I just saw I have you on my MSN.
Much Love
xo

that is AWESOME!!!!!! WOW, excellent job!!! That is amazing, you have a lot a lot a lot of talent!
xoxoxoxoxoxoxo!

This is a really nice poem, the things in it arent to nice...but you have really put it together well...hope things are okay 4 you!!

take care xox mwah!

awww wow that was reli amazin i felt like i was gna cry, it was reli powerful and touchin. 5/5 stay strong and keep writin xxx

Hey, great poem! I have a lot of poems like these too. It's like you're telling a story about a girl who is very depressed and in the end that girl is you... personally, they're my favorite types of poems. You have my style of writing... GREAT JOB! 5/5

~ Tina

wow! that really touched me. I kind of relates to me.Well if u ever need anyone to talk to i am here if you have yahoo.

That was so good! I'm frikkin crying right now! =( This poem is similar to mine. =) You should check it out some time.

This poem is amazing! I love it! I relate so much! I mean it! Its so great though! Sad...But great Job!

Nice Ending Overall Nice Job

Wow. This is so beautiful and sad! Great job hun.

Love,
Tiff

its so good! keep it up and take care
Polly ~X~

if you wanna talk im here xxx