Comments : The Pain I Can't Free

  • 19 years ago

    by pinkalias

    Of course I loved it.
    Such depth into emotional harm and the comparison to a "game" of which you called it. I love the graphic symbols and elaborated strikes which are taken to beat the emotional state. I love these lines,
    "And as I sit breaking, you keep on repeating
    This is your game, and by God, you're defeating

    Flaunting your cruelty, proud of your hate
    Sealed off by destiny, and broken by fate"
    Wonderful job of displaying the incredible cruelty and pride the person takes in pain.
    Excellent