*tears are falling down*

I'm speechless, my heart just skiped a beat and my throat is dry.....This poem is so sad and awful, it really mada me cry!!! I hope this bastard rots in hell and I hope that you'll some day be ok!!!

*Sabrina*

This is a wonderful poem. I think it expresses a lot. It is very sad

hey.. if this story was bout u then im sorry u had to go through that!! u r an awsome poet and i luv this poem...... if u make more let me know becasue i think u r GREAT!!!!! 5/5

hey.. if this story was bout u then im sorry u had to go through that!! u r an awsome poet and i luv this poem...... if u make more let me know becasue i think u r GREAT!!!!! 5/5

This is a really good poem! It was really good that u told your story. i know how it feels to be abused by a family member to. good poem. read/comment on some of mine plzzz

wow! this was a really strong and powerful poem.. filled with LOTS of emotion! i am truly sorry this happened to you and your family. i am sorry what you had to go through. this poem is really sad and very well written. take care sweety, and keep your head up high!

Tis so sad, but congrats for the talent, keep it up x

Wow this is such a powerful poem.

OMG, thats absolutely awesome!

You are a talented writer, indeed, you've put so much feeling to it, it flows just nicely, you're gifted...

Not only it is a great piece of art, but it is also the brave testimony of a girl... because if it's not you who you're talking about, you can really relate to other people's feelings, and that's just as amazing...

I'm really looking forward to read more of your poems, keep up the good work, honey...

If you ever feel like you need to talk to someone, don't think about it twice that I'm here for you, ok?

Look me up on psyduck_zay@hotmail.com

Loves you lots, Zayda

That poem was amazing and very touching. you are great.

This is such a fantastic poem, I really like it, you write amazingly well, i wait for the day when i have talent like yours, you just can't teach it. even though it's such a sad story, it written so well i think it will give people hope.
xx

omg this is such a heart breaking poem nd u did a great job on it every word seems to flow just perfectly 5/5

That was stunning

omg that almost made me cry that was really good!

This is by far the best poem I have read ever! It is so emotional and has such an impact, it's sad. Great job, 5/5

OMG this was soooooo great! i really loved it! wow...it was soo touching...it rhymed...gave an image...and touched my heart! this was very amazing..you are a promising writer!

Poor you xxx it happened to me to it just wasnt my dad Plz comment and vote on some of mine and if u like my work plz add me to ur favs xx thx for ur time
If u want to read mine its called I promise you xx

what an absolutely powerful ending, This was a very very good write, very dramatic, nice flow, and very powerful story. Excellent job!

OMG, That's horrible! The poem was great, and I could feel the emotion. It was amazing! Good job!
~BJ~