Comments : Daddy whispers three

  • 18 years ago

    by lexy

    10/10 it was very good work. this made me feel real sad.but u put it all into a story. good job ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Dacey Flame

    Alright..I'm getting all sniffly and I can feel the tears coming. And my little brothers looking at me funny.
    Just..wow. It shocks me, what people do. But I love when people write about it, its spreading the word about what really does happen.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poet

    I liked tha way u wrote this poem it wuz good and detailed

  • 17 years ago

    by Ashley

    WOW WOW WOW that is all i can really say!!!! that was one of the best poems i have ever read! WOW

  • 17 years ago

    by broken angel

    Oh my god...it...I...I'm speechless thathas got to be the sadest poem I have ever read. I'm so sorry...that's all I can say...

  • 17 years ago

    by Hrtbr8ker89

    This poem was explicity written and i commend you for your work, if you ever need a friend or someone let me know

  • 17 years ago

    by Kersten

    WOW!!!!!!! That was kick but i loved it, but it was so sad....... Your really good i hope you keep up the good work its hard to come across someone that konws how to write something that good keep it up......... You wonderful!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Belle

    Very well written, but also very sad. I hope that one day the world will be rid of the nasty perverts who do this to children. As well as the hope I have that one day the children who this happens to will learn to live on, and forgive.

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow thats such an amazing poem. i cant believe you could write this so well. it makes you just want to cry. its soo good x x keep writing x

  • 17 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Omg! that has to be one of the greatest poems that i have read in a while! that is so sad. i almost started crying! *tear*

    xo kisses xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    That was sooo good!!...omg im soo sorry... 5/5 from me, and you are one of the best writers on here... wow amazing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5.

    PS. plz comment and rate on my poems

  • 17 years ago

    by sami

    This poem was truely inspirational to read,
    nothing like this has happened to me
    but i hear so any stories of it
    if this did happen to you,
    i am so sorry to hear of it.
    it's wrong and cruel.
    a very well written peom
    5 <3

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    OH MY GOD!! this would have to be THE best poem I have ever heard. It is true?? This is so sad and I cannot even begin to imagine. There is so much heart felt emotion in this and I can't seem to look away. You are a great writer!

    much love 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    I cannot get over how sad this poem is. its so brutal yet i cant look away.

  • 17 years ago

    by memorial life

    I cried and my heart stopped this is one of the best poems ive read and it really opens up my eyes to this world thanks for sharing it

  • 17 years ago

    by Lily

    Im sat here with tears in my eyes.. and i shiver ruuning down my back... Amazing poem!
    It just makes you see the stick and twisted people out there... amazing.. speachless
    thank you x

  • 17 years ago

    by Elyse

    Wow ur skill is incredible....
    wow

  • 16 years ago

    by Desray

    Wow this poem was very vivid and was extremely sad but i liked the way you expressed your self and the choice of words

  • 16 years ago

    by Juanita

    OMG!! I wanted 2 cry