by lexy
10/10 it was very good work. this made me feel real sad.but u put it all into a story. good job ;) |
by Dacey Flame
Alright..I'm getting all sniffly and I can feel the tears coming. And my little brothers looking at me funny. |
by Poet
I liked tha way u wrote this poem it wuz good and detailed |
by Ashley
WOW WOW WOW that is all i can really say!!!! that was one of the best poems i have ever read! WOW |
by broken angel
Oh my god...it...I...I'm speechless thathas got to be the sadest poem I have ever read. I'm so sorry...that's all I can say... |
by Hrtbr8ker89
This poem was explicity written and i commend you for your work, if you ever need a friend or someone let me know |
by Kersten
WOW!!!!!!! That was kick but i loved it, but it was so sad....... Your really good i hope you keep up the good work its hard to come across someone that konws how to write something that good keep it up......... You wonderful!!! |
by Belle
Very well written, but also very sad. I hope that one day the world will be rid of the nasty perverts who do this to children. As well as the hope I have that one day the children who this happens to will learn to live on, and forgive. |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow thats such an amazing poem. i cant believe you could write this so well. it makes you just want to cry. its soo good x x keep writing x |
by xo kisses xo
Omg! that has to be one of the greatest poems that i have read in a while! that is so sad. i almost started crying! *tear* |
by Sara
That was sooo good!!...omg im soo sorry... 5/5 from me, and you are one of the best writers on here... wow amazing! |
by Wallace
Excellent poem, i really enjoyed it good work 5/5. |
by sami
This poem was truely inspirational to read, |
by HUGIYDAWY
OH MY GOD!! this would have to be THE best poem I have ever heard. It is true?? This is so sad and I cannot even begin to imagine. There is so much heart felt emotion in this and I can't seem to look away. You are a great writer! |
by HUGIYDAWY
I cannot get over how sad this poem is. its so brutal yet i cant look away. |
I cried and my heart stopped this is one of the best poems ive read and it really opens up my eyes to this world thanks for sharing it |
by Lily
Im sat here with tears in my eyes.. and i shiver ruuning down my back... Amazing poem! |
by Elyse
Wow ur skill is incredible.... |
by Desray
Wow this poem was very vivid and was extremely sad but i liked the way you expressed your self and the choice of words |
by Juanita
OMG!! I wanted 2 cry |