Breaking Point

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 10, 2005


My breakin’ point aint far away
I’m not sure how much more I can take
Its so close I can feel it
I’m about to snap
I’m about to loose it
So get off my back

Been pushed so far
Been pulled apart
Been beaten to the ground
And picked up to be dropped
Been put through some unbelievable sh*t
Yeah I know everyone has to deal with it

But all I’m askin’ for is a little break
Between the hardships I constantly have to take
Just let me take a little break
Before I fall apart and break

My breakin’ point is near I fear
I’m not sure I can make it another year
So close I can feel myself slipping away
I may not even make it another day
I’m loosin’ myself
don’t know what to do
I’m slippin’ away
Because of you

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    have you ever heard of cause and effect. Well you wrote the effect but the cause is lacking. If your gonna write about some one who cause you pain or why they pushed you to such states I would encourage you to write about the cause too. That way the reader gets the full picture. If you just want to write for yourself that cool hide your work if you wish to share it with others look at your work from a readers point of view what will they get out of this poem. Think about it and take care...

  • 19 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    hi! I did not find the poem you wanted me to read so I read this instead! its great.

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