I Loved It ...The Meaning Was Very Heavy I Loved The Way You Worded This 5 Out Of 5! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Hmm. Good poem, but the flow needs more work. It's pretty choppy. Why not try having the same amount of syllables in each line or something? Atleast that way the flow would be improved. The idea was good though. Keep writing,
Satuxxa

It's very well written.