Jade and Amanda

by Amanda   May 10, 2005


Joined together with me at the hip,
Always there for me in despair,
Doing everything to help me,
Even show me that you care,

Always around both you and me,
Never leave each other's mind,
Definately the best kind of friends,
that you will ever find,

Always here to wipe those tears,
My heart will give you lots of care,
Also when you're feeling lonely,
Never fear - I will be there,
Do anything, for you my friend,
And keep you safe, until the end.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda - Linzi

This isn't my best but I just wanted to try something different. Not sure if I like this one. Read it down the side :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O0o i love the way that you wrote it. how it spells Jade and Amanda down the side and how it still has the rhyme scheme! g8t job!
    ღ*CiaO*ღ

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a great acrostic poem that does not let the format, or the rhyme distract from the content or the message meant to be conveyed in this sincere praise of a special friendship

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    You say it isn't your best, but i liked it alot! I thought it was very nice n full of emotion and lovely words!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bredada

    dats good how u have opems dedicated to your friends

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Yeah jubii, just found out that my poem is on the list of Top rated recent sad poems.... =0)

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