wow i can really really relate to this poem, you have talent. amazing write. im always here if you need to talk xxxxxxxxxx

That was okay. Not really captivating but okay.

I'm sorry for who i am
You can leave me alone
or can chose to stay
but everyone seems so happy
i feel like the only one
Even though you're here i still feel so alone

Personally those seemed to be the better lines. The overall thing was okay though.
~FotF