by Jacklyn
cool, tell your mom nice job, i like how she ended it the most. fixing the bunny and then just laughing. good job! |
by No1ButMe
I really liked this end! It is so very true especially about people on this site. But we have to stick together and hold our heads up high! For your never the only one going through pain! |
by Lmay
great poem! you have a very talented mum, 5/5! |
by ?
Your mum wrote this!?! WOW! Thats so cool, my mum would never write poems like this. Its really good! I love it! Tell your mum to keep it up! xxx |
by Dianna M Tuohy
Whoa. You're mom is mega cool to have wrote such a fantastic poem, hun. Kudos to you and your mum! |
by UnWanted02
wow i thought this was really good. It showed a lot of depth and for your mum to write this obviously means she totally gets us |
by Forever29
I like this very much. I gave it a 5. Reminds me of an old teddy bear I used to have, and threw out. Good piece! |
this was an awesome poem! really good! tell yr mom she's rlly talented! if u could, take alook at some of mine! thx! |
by HOLLY ARMER
Wow...amazing ending! I remember in kindergarten I colored a bunny purple and the other kids made fun of it! This made me think of that! I'm not surprised that your Mom wrote this, my mom happens to be a brilliant poet! You should encourage your Mom to post more, she's really talented~Holly |
by Nicholle
I love it =] Please comment on my poems |
by anissa
Wow, thats really good! Could you read mine? =( |
Awww....how adorable..A bit odd definately, but I give your mother a 5. :) |
by Cierra
I think that poem is awsome tell your mom she kicks a** keep it up |
by Miss Misfit
Ha, that was great, ur mom is awesome...keep up the good work. |