I gave my heart to you

by Roni   May 10, 2005


You were my dream guy
you were so passionate
you were almost perfect
you gave me red roses
you told me that i was your shinning star

Whenever i shed my tears
you were always there
there to catch them and to tell me
that every thing is gonna be alright
just wait and see.

I trusted you
I gave you
my loving heart
I would never leave you
even when you smacked me down

I still stayed with you
When i should of left
you always said sorry
you always left me love letters with a white rose on top
you said you would Change
for the good.

were we meant to be?
Do you love me the way i love you?
Does the red rose, stand for the anger?
Does the white mean Love?

~This idea i got from the book "Things Change"(GREAT book). Plz tell me what you think, and how i can improve it. If you ppl gonna rate a one on it. PLZ TELL ME WHY, AND HOW I CAN IMPROVE IT!!!!! (i don't wanna sound mean about that) I don't think this is a Love poem or a sad poem what do you think?~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bex

    yer its good tbh i dont think u really need to work on it but i guess im one of thos if it means something to you let ppl injoy it or not if thats the case lol keep on writing

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    it kinda has a rocky ending but i think we can fix it up with no problem! ithe rest is pretty good and i can see how it relate to the book! go job you! i think it can go in lost love or something, i think thats in the love section, or lost relationship in sad poems, great job!

    ~PLP~ lots of hugs & love~