it kinda has a rocky ending but i think we can fix it up with no problem! ithe rest is pretty good and i can see how it relate to the book! go job you! i think it can go in lost love or something, i think thats in the love section, or lost relationship in sad poems, great job!

~PLP~ lots of hugs & love~

yer its good tbh i dont think u really need to work on it but i guess im one of thos if it means something to you let ppl injoy it or not if thats the case lol keep on writing