by babysprinkles May 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Someday we will meet again. Someday we wont live in this life of sin.Someday everyone will remember. Someday someone will be forever yours to treasure. Someday I will see that you wernt meant for me. Someday he will see all the pain that he caused to me.Someday will you see that we can forever be.Remeber how cute we used to be everyone said we were meant to be.Everyone will die and go to heaven to prove they deserve to be there but when god says no and turns them away then thats when they will regret what they do and say someday can you see that me and you were sent here to earth to be together he wanted up to be eachothers saviors and guardians threw thick and thin I just cant see when someday will finally be!!!!! |
thank you a lot and i will go through with the periods thing thanks though |
by Chelsey
Hello there! First of all I'd like to thank you for your comment! It meant a lot..Second of all I see you just recently started posting..so welcome! This poem was very well said..it showed you emotions and you stuck with your topic..I'd also like to tell you to remember to add Periods if you write it the way you did..It will be hard for the reader to read because it will be all one sentence! Great Job though and Keep up the good work! |