Comments : Heaven to Hell

  • 19 years ago

    by Neil

    im sorry for these negatives but i had 2 4 u 2 improve

    in the line " created you from me to love " da word from does not fit

    the line " ill wait for you at cloud eleven" elven does not fit....and i saw other words were forced

  • 19 years ago

    by Jay27

    one of the sweetest poems ever I have read, keep it up : )

  • 19 years ago

    by crissy abalos

    h!
    c remi to
    aLUFET!
    i'm empress!!
    so much!!
    ^^
    ns