The end

by Madi   May 11, 2005


The night was black and the moon was full everybody was quiet but nobody knew that the end was coming very very soon

the world started spinning and the lights went out the lightning struck and the thunder rolled out the mountains tumbled and the trees blew

but still nobody knew.....

then the fire started and it grew and grew bigger an bigger all over the world

but yet nobody knew that the fire that spread all over the world was the end of all ends

but yet.....nobody knew.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kurt

    It is confusing. Its also jumpy and dodges around the subject. Be a little more specific and split the lines up and make it a little longer. It has a potential to be great if you work on it and get progressively better.

  • 19 years ago

    by redxiii

    Hey i got a street fight sat that i will be in so i wanted to talk to u b4 it well i guess thats cool ttul bye