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  • 19 years ago

    by redxiii

    Hey i got a street fight sat that i will be in so i wanted to talk to u b4 it well i guess thats cool ttul bye

  • 19 years ago

    by Kurt

    It is confusing. Its also jumpy and dodges around the subject. Be a little more specific and split the lines up and make it a little longer. It has a potential to be great if you work on it and get progressively better.